Overall, exhibition night was really good for me because I got to show other’s what I’ve been learning this semester and how hard I’ve been working to make my projects as good as they are right now. Everything went really smoothly for my groups and I felt more comfortable when I answered the first questions when all the people came in because I already knew there were going to ask hard questions. The vibe during exhibition night was really good and seeing everyone having fun while keeping it professional. Some of my group’s strengths were answering the questions they asked us very professional and accurate because that was our key to success for exhibition night and also when someone would try to change the subject from our project, we would come back and say more facts about our project. Some of our weaknesses were having food behind us that our mom’s gave us and that wasn’t professional for some parts. But that was our only weakness and I really thought all my groups did really well for exhibition night. The most challenging interaction I had during exhibition night was when my mom comes in and starts talking about something different other than my project and it took me five minutes to take her back to my project because I couldn’t talk about anything else but our projects. So I thought I handled that situation really well because it was my mom so she understood a little bit easier. The only thing I would do differently if I could, it would be not having food behind us when were presenting because it was not professional, but overall I wouldn’t change anything else because I really did well and I’m proud of my group members.
Friday, April 18, 2008
Tuesday, April 1, 2008
Character Study
What I learned in today’s character's study was that there is more to your character than you might not know. When you are trying to be a character, you have to be the character and be in the zone that you can't just be yourself if someone is holding a gun to your head. You have to go into your character like it was a real conflict happening. What I also learned was that one of my characters has more potential to be someone more exciting after today character study because it opened my eyes that if you try and act a character you made, that is one stage that you learn from. You see the change when you write your character on paper and then actually being them.
Some new elements I will use now to make my characters more complex to the story is to make my character more energetic and my hyped up because before the character study my character Adrian use to be clam to anything. Now I want to make him fiercer when scary stuff pop out or when there is going to be a car crash. When my character is more energetic, he seems more fun to look at and learn more about because he isn't boring and now he can act like a real Nazi in my story! Now my story will be more exciting to read because it is during World War II and there is someone that cares about the Nazi party and will do anything for them, then just being clam about being a Nazi. It will become boring when you had the regular
Monday, March 31, 2008
Character Bios
Alphonse Heidrich
Alphonse Heidrich is a average height (5’8’’). He has blonde, spiked hair, with a light brown skin tone. He’s a young man about twenty six years old. Alphonse Heidrich is a fit man because he trained as a marine in Germany. He is a short tempered man. Alphonse as supposed to marry a girl when he was twenty but she died in a military accident. Three minutes after he turned twenty six he was sent to America as a spy to observe the production of America’s new weapons. After 1 year he was sent a letter from Germany explaining his transfer to the Manhattan Project.
Alyssa Elric
Alyssa is a short (5’2’’) girl with straight brown hair. She has tanned skin. Her family was killed by a man named Edward Hohenheim so she is often having small panic attacks. Alyssa Elric is a Twenty four year old and is currently engaged to a Jewish man in Berlin named Manny Mallory. Manny’s being Jewish aside she joined the Nazi party because the money she was offered along with the promise that her fiancĂ©e would be moved to a safe location and not murdered. Alyssa has no siblings. She dies during the testing of the plutonium bomb of a heart attack caused by a powerful panic attack.
Adrian Eckhart
Adrian is a rather tall man (6’1’’) with blonde hair and blue eyes, brown skin and spiky hair. He is a little bit on the chubby side. Adrian is a twenty five year old German who loves listening to radio storys and and reading American novels.
Sub Characters
Adolf Hitler
He is the Leader of the Nazi party.
Hitler’s Wife
Dr. Edward Teller
Albert Einstein
He helped write the letter to the president warning him about the Germans intent to research nuclear fission
General Heinz
This is the general that sends Alphonse, Alyssa and Adrian to work on the Manhattan Project a month after it is established.
Story Synopsis
Finally I am at my work and it is raining like crazy now. Right when I get out of my car I see lighting just a few feet away from me hit the ground, so I run now to the door! Laughing my way inside because I thought I was about to die, but my workers cheered me up by saying we are building a nuclear bomb. Being a Nazi isn’t easy because I didn’t like what have been doing in this war, but if say anything bad about my people I’ll get killed! So after I saw what we were doing after a long day, it was time to go home with the ugly storm that is upon Germany. Right when I’m getting off the freeway another car doesn’t see me with the rain and darkness and almost crashes into me. I stop and he does too and I’m about to say words that I shouldn’t be saying, but then I realize it’s my friend. He tells me that the Nazi people are killing innocent Jews now and it’s getting out of control. I say to myself how can I solve this situation of saving Germany and stopping Adolph Hitler ruling? Then it hit me, I said to my friend I can I just help the U.S. defeat our soldiers in this war and stop this madness even though I am a Nazi. My friends tells me that if I am a true Nazi. I said not really because I don’t agree for the things we are doing. It is wrong and I need to help bring peace back to Germany.
I told my friend to follow me to my house to talk about we are going to do about this situation. We arrive at my house and it is really cold outside. So he tells me while he takes off his coat, what are you going to do about this situation and if the other Nazi know what I’m about to do they will kill me. I said I went to work and they told me we are working on a nuclear bomb. So it hit me that if I tell the U.S about this, they can make them one too and I can help because I know what the Nazi are doing to create a nuclear bomb. Your crazy, but brave he told me and I said as long it brings back peace back to this country. I told my work that I’ll be on my vacation, but little do they know I’ll be visiting the U.S and some of the best scientists in New Mexico for a big meeting that I told everyone to go to! When I called all the best scientist about my plan they didn’t trust me, but I told them I don’t agree with anything what us Nazi’s are doing and they all said they will meet me in New Mexico to start on this plan I have created! I am on the plane on my way to the U.S and I’m on the phone with J. Robery Oppenheimr, the other scientist that is helping me with the design for our new nuclear weapon because I going to give him my ideas I saw from our factory and he made new plans for the bomb also. When we get to Los Alamos we will put our ideas together and make the best nuclear bomb in history. When I arrived in New Mexico, a bus had the entire best scientist in the world to Los Alamos, a secret destination only for us to discuss our plans to create the first atomic bomb so this war can end. When we arrived at our first check point, I looked around and said to myself this isn’t like Germany at all. They had Los Alamos on lock down; no one except the scientist can enter. They had park rangers around the mountains because we were surrounded by mountains and all check points had heavily security guards there to protect us for any spies that wanted to know what was going around. We were confident that we will make this happen so I can see peace back to this world and especially stop Japan and Hitler for killing anymore people. So we gathered in this room to talk about what we will do on making this bomb right and secure. We had different jobs like using math to figure out the amount of energy to destroy a whole city and building the outside part of the bomb. So I presented to myself as a Nazi that wants to help the U.S. to victory because its hell back in Germany and I had ideas that we can use that the German’s are using to create a bomb too! So we started as early as we could and I was with Oppenheimr, one of the head physicists in this project including me and we brought all ideas together and drew out what the bomb would look like. After we were done with that I got a phone call from my friend telling me it is getting more dangerous in Germany and more Jews are getting killed in camps. So that pissed me off so badly that I told Oppenheimer we are going to create bomb that will grantee to destroy a whole city.
Sunday, March 9, 2008
Persepolis
2. What are the experiences Marji endures in the text and how do those experiences shape her perceptions of her family, her country, and herself?
Marji had to wear a veil in the beginning of the book and she didn't want to wear it at all. So I think she gets really mad and this really starts Marji to get more in this fight for there freedom in Iran. Her parents are always going to protest aganist the new king because there isn't anything else to do at home, but Marji can't go because she is to young. I think she got more stronger when she said she can't and seeing her parents fighting for there freedom. So when there was a day when the parents didn't go protest, her and the babysitter went to protest so they can feel how it felt to protest. Even though her parents were mad at her for doing the actions she did, the family stayed strong through the bombings, killings in their family, and they were acting like a strong family that will fight until they get what is right.
3. What do you think happens to Marji when she heads to Vienna? Write the remaining story of her life up unto the time she writes this text in 2002.
When Marji goes ti Vienna I think she will help other country's that have the same problems she had with her life and try to make the people in the country that needs help more easier. But of course she will get back to learning French again and meet new friends that have the same ideas a her. She will always contact her family every week because she wants to know that they are safe. But one of the weeks she has been contacting them, they don't call back. She is a little worried but still has faith that her family is still alive even though the war is still going on. Then she finds out that her family has died because of a roadside bomb out of the house and she is really depressed. She starts to care less to live but she remembers that she was a soul survivor when she was with her family and she starts to say to herself that she can't give up. She needs to continue what her family started and that is to help to secure freedom and stand up for what is right!